Criticize as always, please. The scary house. As I stood, looking at the dilapidated house. I shivered, as if ice had replaced my spine. The cold air enveloped the whole body. The multiple layers of clothing could not protect against the deadly cold. The driveway leading to the house was cracked. Overview of Descriptive Beach Writing - Miami. Introduction. Thesis: The beach is one of the best places for recreation and fun for adventurers. Body: The most notable beach is Miami Beach. During spring break in March, I visited Miami Beach, and I was blown away by the salt and, Here is my first example answer: The illustration shows two images of the same island, before and after the construction of 'tourist infrastructure. Before the construction of tourist facilities, the island was surrounded by sea on all sides and had clumps of trees to the east and west.